I am a Year 6 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Miss Hansell.
Friday, 19 October 2012
Narrative practice Week 1
“Stop that thief!” yelled Officer Baker as he ran through the streets. He was chasing a criminal named Tight walker who was a professional thief. Tight walker was a man who always wore a suit when he stole, even though he did not wear a mask no one had ever seen his face. Officer Baker was quite a plump man so he could not run that fast. “ I said stop!” screamed the huffing and puffing officer. Tight walker was running on top of a fence, his balance was incredible . Finally the Officer gave in, “I will get him next time” he mumbled under his breath.
1 week passed , at the police station and all the cops were extremely bored. “Tight walker has not stolen anything lately” said detective sanders. She let out a long sigh. “Maybe...he will never steal again” replied detective smith . “Well , i do wish he would steal something soon” said sanders again. Suddenly Officer Bakers stormed into the room.
“What are you all talking about!” exclaimed Officer Baker cheerfully. “ We should be celebrating” he laughed . “Why” answered detective smith. “ WHY?” shrieked Baker , “Tight walker has not stolen anything lately , isn't that great” he pointed out. “But tight walker’s the man who actually gives us something to do” explained detective sanders . All the cops nodded. “ I guess you’re right “ answered Officer Baker as he thought about the situation.
Suddenly detective smith stood up and said “why are we even cops can’t we get a better life”. Everyone was quiet then they all began to grin. “Great idea” they said together .”YIPPEE “ yelled the detectives and officers as they grabbed their equipment and fled the building.
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